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I need to start making AI stories. I can do better.
OK, you had me until you said, "Fire a warning shot across their bow." Who the ever loving hell fires a warning shot against a war target when you know they are going to butcher you. Not to mention, in the vacuum of space there's no kinetic energy transfer unless there's a direct impact. Jesus, was this written by AI?
I enjoyed the story. I put it on to fall asleep to BIG mistake I ended up listening to the whole thing š¤£
The names have been changed but this is Space Battleship Yamato.
I like that scene in Axis of Time, where the crews are knocked out after the time travel, and the ship's AI systems takes over as emergency procedures kicks in.
Worth a tv series, if they did it right
Very engaging, but lots of inconsistencies, was this AI written ?
Good one
Just a note on thermite. It doesn't explode, it burns through just about anything.
Fix your AI it cant pronounce words for CHIT FFS
this would make a great movie
The moment the battleship changes to dreadnaught and nobody cares.
And XXth century battleship? Come on! The AI is hallucinating
I was enthralled with this story. Right up until the "Warning shot across their bow".
You mean to tell me that with the fate of the Earth at stake, you're going to fire a "warning shot"???
That ended the whole thing for me.
Six minutes of my life wasted and however long it took me to complain about it…
not any good.
What a great story. Great idea in the writers part ,about using an ancient Earth battleship and repurposing it to be able to fly in space.
The poor old New Jersey ,should head back to Earth, to be restored and made into a museum.
Thanks another awesome story!
Not a bad read, good story there.
Nice story !
I loved the mental image of the "Big J" and the feisty P-51 Mustangs in the story. However, armament ready weapons, a full gas tank, operational machines, and an experienced crew familiar with ancient weapons? Too many liberties with the writing…
I like the story
Clean up your production, please.
I tried to overlook the AI slaughtering the language because it is confusing and interrupts the flow of the story.
And! There is a lack of plausibly in the storyline, which I chalked up to "Fantasy" because I really wanted the plot to work.
But the worst irritation is the overabundance of commercials. Why so many?
I can see a lot of potential here, but this production could be better. I encourage you to improve your style.
Good luck
A space going battleship, sounds like space battleship Yamato (Star Blazers)
i really liked the story, TYVM š
Thank you
Thanks for the story I enjoyed it
Nice story but you lost me at the thermite Explosive.š
Quick question for You. Why arenāt these awesome stories in order (Chronological Order)????? I donāt know which is the first story, second, third, or even fourth!!!!!! Which stories are āStand Aloneā stories.
These stories would be awesome if they were made into Hollywood Movies.