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Humans are Space Orcs
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Decent story line. But I have noticed on a number of your segments the order is mixed up. Just saying.
Keep up the good work π
Dialogue seems like it was written by a 15 year old that was choosing the dialogue by what "sounds cool". π
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Aliens: we'll destory you down the the last!
Humans: Gregorian chanting intensifies
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At 1:28:40 there is an editing error where a secondary thread is followed rather than the one that just completed.
The storyline is all over the place. This isn't the only time I've noticed it. Maybe someone needs help with their cut and paste?
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They surprise attack and leave multiple Human bodies behind. Then, they are surprised the Galactics are mad and demand their surrender?
Who wrote this? Plus, the dialogue and descriptions are just a bunch of over the top statements.
In the beginning it sounds a lot of HALO.
Story is not consistend. A lot of mix ups in storyline. Right in the beginning the super soldiers started with their ship and in the next moment John talk to the earth leaders. Lot of plot mistakes. I had to stop listening, because story is scattered and gets more and more confusing.
Thare are to manny isseus why the story line already in the first 37 minuts that i stopt the story. The concept is cool .
Great story β€
Well alrighty then. 2 different outcomes to the same battle.
Hope this heips
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Could/would you put together a list that covers all of your stories listed in storie time.
Randomly repeats an entire section about 1:29:00 in. Plotline is genuinely awful.