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Hey, this tale is a great teaser for a series. It would be great to see this tale continue.
I liked the story, reminds me of CBC's midnight theatre.
the title clearly stated that the aliens brought the t-rex? to earth to eat humans, not the other way around and where the hell are these monsters from earth for the empire top collect which is ass backward from what the title stated.
Why tell the end of the story in the first sentence.
When I buy a book I don’t read the last page first.
This was a good short. Was there anymore?
I like this story. There should be a Part 2.
So they're a race of warm-blooded reptiles who sweat? LOL!
The application of both alien and domestic friends (K9, reptilian, et al), is a theme I thoroughly enjoy. In addition where our species win and eventually dominate. Thank you!
it was great until 16:20min in then it jumped like it had a whole chapter missing. slow down & introduce how you got from touching the beasts snout to fighting beside each other. this is not a 2 second process. if you want to make the story-line flow or believable don't jump ahead with assumptions because it makes the story loose cohesion & interest
you made another big mistake at 18:30. so far in the story you only have half a dozen of these creatures. when did it suddenly became more? you need to create a few sentences to create more of these creatures. don't assume the reader knows how they came about
the rest of the story was ok. . a little short on details and the end was rushed. The biggest issue left hanging is the explanation of what how the wraiths interacted with the magma & why. Yellowstone is underlain by two magma bodies. The shallower one is composed of rhyolite (a high-silica rock type) & stretches from 5 km to about 17 km (3 to 10 mi) beneath the surface & is about 90 km long & about 40 km wide. The chamber is mostly solid, with only about 5-15% melted. This information could be incorporated & used in various ways to give the story depth & credibility
This is the fifth story with this plot i have seen since the success of the first one.
I love the stories, but I wish the were episodic!
Please CONTINUE !!!
Like all your stories ❤
No Dinos here in Montana, but some of the grizzlies are a close second.
Terrible speech to text
I very much enjoyed the story thank you
Not bad at all
enjoyed greatly x 88
Really, a great story!❤
"Stop these animals or you're all going to die" is not a cryptic message – it's not a message at all, it's a warning and certainly not 'cryptic' because the 'animal' spoke in English.
I like this story.
Aliens: ha these beasts will kill those humans for sure
Humans: get domesticated idiot