They Mocked Earth, Until Our Secret Fleet Emerged From The Wormhole | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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Yeah the title is nonsense. Should be aliens fight back against genocidal xenophobic humans. What are primitives going to do the Krell of any of the advanced aliens couldn't.
not one thing in the title happened.
Confused and not feeling this story.
Yeah the title is nonsense. Should be aliens fight back against genocidal xenophobic humans. What are primitives going to do the Krell of any of the advanced aliens couldn't.
I don't think this was the right title for this story.
The title has nothing to do with the story unless this is a part 1 and the fleet shows itself in a part 2.
The premise is okay
What did the Xenos do to incur humanity's wrath? We don't start sh*t, but we damn sure finish it.
This story seems incomplete. 🤔
So many repeating sentences!
You really need better editing. Totally destroys the quality of the story….
Several sentences repeated. Needs editing.