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Continuity much?
On their way back to Earth, but suddenly in combat again? Something was missed.
I like the story I like listening to you do it very well keep it up. Thank you very much Frank.
Why do the story loop?
Nice to see the ships in the thumbnail before they became hulks
Babylon 5?
Activate the Omega 13.
Never give up, never surrender.
Nice idea. But there's no way that a mothballed fleet could be brought into action in hours let alone minutes.
Jumping around. Crap ai voice. Ads ads ads. This is why aggro squirrel is best
Let the force be with you.
So, if these were ancient dreadnoughts, why weren't they……aww, fuck it.
How long would it take for a reactor, or multiple to power up? And at least one would have to be on line before any consoles or other systems would boot up. And then weapons spinning up once power was restored to them. But the crew did all this is minutes.
And in the story it's always Dreadnoughts, plural. So how can the crew from one ship power up and handle several?
And every time they win a battle and head for earth, next sentence they are in the middle of a battle. And in every battle one ship's weapons tear through the enemy ships as if they were paper. Same descriptives over and over.
So many holes here.
Ok my bad these we not active moth ball . Engine nead warm up to power systems vrews not of dreadnaught time frame security protocols
Is this a game?
AI story telling. Flawed and incongruous.
one can always tell the difference between an original story written by a human author, and an AI word vomit pretending to be a story. The massive repetition of common phrases. only so many times a ship dies like paper or shatters like glass or describing the vaccume of space as the void while their hearts pound with grim determination.
Great story.
I thought the objective was the enemy home world and its destruction????
Story is very repetitive and the time sequence between battles makes no sense.
Fix your AI its KRAP
Chill down the spine. Chill down the spine. Chill down the spine. Filled with dread. Filled with dread. God damn ai likes to overuse those words.
I like this story.
Im sorry, but that storey line just doesnt make any sense! Hey Zoraxians, just give us a minute for us to swap ships ok? Really??
Way too many ads
Poor editing.
You could cut out about 20 minutes by cutting the redundant, repetitive lines.
The story has obviously been shortened cutting as much as”fat” as possible.
crap
So one earth ship with, it would seem, one crew somehow manned a number (how many?) of super antiquated warships and defeated an enemy fleet with superior firepower and agility. There are holes in this story you can sail a supertanker through.
This AI crap needs to stop, this was not a story, but a damn boring word salad
when you write "FullStory" i await a full story not a half not a third or 90%….full means full
I like the story. You doing a great jobb giving us this.
They were never used, but the hulls are scored from battle?
Terran tactics would dictate movement in fleets, though a smaller group might be used for a secret mission.
It takes 24 hours to safely bring a nuclear reactor up to full power, how long to fully power up a ship that large
They dock with one ship but board multiple ships
Yeah, not bad bones, but definately needs a human to clean it up.
tbh not a great story. phrase repeat over and over needs a good editor.
Very nice… I really like your stories… keep them coming.
I like the story
OK I am confused is this just one complete story or is there another part because it goes from here to a super carrier returning to earth
So a British 1800’s Ship of the Line attacks a US DDG destroyer. I wonder who wins 😂
Was this compiled by an AI ? to many repertitions, have not seen this beofre, al most like the Victirian era monolouge style. Leona,
what movie or book is this?
They like to repeat themselves don't they
Enjoyable enough story but confused in general. Them getting the Dreadnoughts from the third planet I assumed it was ancient Earth but then they speak about defending Earth…
If some of you don't like the AI story, why are you here? What's the plan, insult AI into submission? You know it's not going to work, right? You're the guys who made the horse and cart, AI is the motor car. 🤦🏻♂️
these lazy ass channels are popping up so much. ai generated story with an ai voice over reading said story. if you're too lazy to make content, maybe pick a different career path?
I really did like your audio book. Do you have a sequel to it?
I thought while the kalnuri team with volkov was attacking the out post the fleet was going to attack the home world! But all of a sudden their heading back to earth on the dauntless? WTF? get your time lines straight and stick with it! sorry dude nice story fucked by stupid time line skips