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Humans are Space Orcs
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GMO to the rescue nice twist on woke garbage
If the germs don't get them, the additives will.
You asked for feedback.
I think the idea has legs.
The pacing is far too fast, in part because important parts of the story are explained rather than experienced. We don't really 'meet' the characters. You described them in the third person rather than their first person perspective. It could easily have unfold in three separate chapters. The initial contact, the return and the discovery.