The main reason this story won't garner as much appeal to many audio book readers is the story has too much exposition and third person narrator opinion speech rather than first person encounter reactions. That's usually a sign of rushing a story without doing the work of more details. As soon as narration became what the speaker thought of the action rather than actually telling events as they occur, that was the moment a listener will lose interest. That precise point is when the story states that the protagonist left the command ship of the alien vessel. Once travel to Earth was stated by the narrator you can tell the plot points of the story was sped up. This story should have been a multi-chapter audio book rather than a one off that rushes an ending.
You know this is soulless AI speak when you see, 432 subscribers but 14k views in 11 hours. People click on it, maybe even listen to such a short story, but no one subscribes. Why would anyone subscribe, there is nothing here, but an artificial voice reading a short story (in the voice of Liam Neeson.)
Very poorly paced writing we were at the climax before I really knew what was happening. It would also serve the story to have some descriptions, there is scarcely and adjective in the whole story.
we are In the End times also Jesus is the only way! Jesus is coming / rapture soon!
Jacobs troubles ( 7 year tribulation / hell on earth ) is coming ( Israel formally declares war against Hamas / But now Israel is Surrounded on 7 Fronts… ) If we Christians disappear soon, Your know the Lord has taken us Home! Now we need prayed for the Jews and to get many people saved as possible… 🙂
Romans 10:9-13
King James Version
9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.
10 For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness; and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.
11 For the scripture saith, Whosoever believeth on him shall not be ashamed.
Q
12 For there is no difference between the Jew and the Greek: for the same Lord over all is rich unto all that call upon him.
13 For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved.
Acts 2:38-39
King James Version
38 Then Peter said unto them, Repent, and be baptized every one of you in the name of Jesus Christ for the remission of sins, and ye shall receive the gift of the Holy Ghost.
39 For the promise is unto you, and to your children, and to all that are afar off, even as many as the Lord our God shall call.
Afterward, earth developed technology far beyond that of the aliens, determined where their home planet was and completely wiped them out.
Trash writing
AI has no idea how to write a good story.
The main reason this story won't garner as much appeal to many audio book readers is the story has too much exposition and third person narrator opinion speech rather than first person encounter reactions. That's usually a sign of rushing a story without doing the work of more details. As soon as narration became what the speaker thought of the action rather than actually telling events as they occur, that was the moment a listener will lose interest. That precise point is when the story states that the protagonist left the command ship of the alien vessel. Once travel to Earth was stated by the narrator you can tell the plot points of the story was sped up. This story should have been a multi-chapter audio book rather than a one off that rushes an ending.
Xenomorph Power Rangers? Pretty cool.
Liam Neeson vs Aliens. Go figure. 😅
This voice doesn't sound quite human to me. Sorry if you are.
You know this is soulless AI speak when you see, 432 subscribers but 14k views in 11 hours. People click on it, maybe even listen to such a short story, but no one subscribes. Why would anyone subscribe, there is nothing here, but an artificial voice reading a short story (in the voice of Liam Neeson.)
AI crap.
a fantasy story fit for preschoolers & Santa clause believers . unrealistic & simplistic!
I have a particular set of skills.😊😂
💙👍🏼
So this guy was surrounded by a circle of aliens… all seeing and laughing at him…
Then he hurls his emp into the middle of the circle…😂
This story is a cut and paste non sensical narrative of bs…🎉
Wait, where the hell did he get a seismic charge and how did he get out of the canyon?
7:00 Now he has an alien device? Man, this story sucks!
a panel slightly ajar. 🙄
Title should have been "Plot Armor".
Very poorly paced writing we were at the climax before I really knew what was happening. It would also serve the story to have some descriptions, there is scarcely and adjective in the whole story.
What program can I use for creating this kind of stuff?
A space fairy tale. 🙄
This was cut, had too many tropes. Sorry, did not do it for me.
Ai readers again. Ffs lazyness and misuse of the voice.
we are In the End times also Jesus is the only way! Jesus is coming / rapture soon!
Jacobs troubles ( 7 year tribulation / hell on earth ) is coming ( Israel formally declares war against Hamas / But now Israel is Surrounded on 7 Fronts… ) If we Christians disappear soon, Your know the Lord has taken us Home! Now we need prayed for the Jews and to get many people saved as possible… 🙂
Romans 10:9-13
King James Version
9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.
10 For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness; and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.
11 For the scripture saith, Whosoever believeth on him shall not be ashamed.
Q
12 For there is no difference between the Jew and the Greek: for the same Lord over all is rich unto all that call upon him.
13 For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved.
Acts 2:38-39
King James Version
38 Then Peter said unto them, Repent, and be baptized every one of you in the name of Jesus Christ for the remission of sins, and ye shall receive the gift of the Holy Ghost.
39 For the promise is unto you, and to your children, and to all that are afar off, even as many as the Lord our God shall call.
They Kind of look like power Rangers 🙂
Nice 😊
There is a key mistake in the story that the guy secaping from Mars will not fly through the astroid feild its twards Jupiter not Earth
@kenjiyama68 it's interesting that you say that, it sounding like Liam Neeson… because I was just thinking the same thing!🤔 that's really cool!
This was SO bad. Full of empty platitudes, logical fallacies and plot holes big enough to drive the alien flagship through. Avoid.
We're just ignoring the title feels like a Dhar Mann video title with aliens thrown in?