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Is this stuff AI generated? Be nice to hear some complete sentences some characterization… I know it's a good writing formula sort of like 'cartoons' short bursts of a few words to generate an image, hey, how does this work for kids just learning to read? not that i know a thing about writing esp lately gave up reading decades ago a costly hobby, a time consuming hoppy that multiple jobs and elder care didn't leave time or money for.
This story is weak, incomplete. Rick is too timid for a military officer.
You can tell this story was written by someone who no military experience. Sad!
Disjoined not a story at all but others you have were pretty good
Problems.
1) Story moves too fast.
2) Tech understanding and integration moves unbelievably too fast. This sort of overlaps with the first probkem.
3) fortunes in war and negotiations and working together go too good all the time.
4) there is an annoying cadence of stories naration.
5) lastly and most importantly, the strength of written and audio books is in the capacity to explore the depth of thought of its characters, and sadly this story's shallowness fails to capitalize on this media's greatest strength.
i listened til 24:19 and decided that it was a seaste of time , to chaotic, and conflicting you should take it down
Capture the leader but then attack ?
Not really a story, just a genre-based word salad. Unfortunate.