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Double checked for plot holes and continuity errors. Hard to write so much haha, the YT algorithm forces me to do multiple videos a week…
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Rock and Roll.
The sound pops before and after each sentence, makes it hard to get into the story when that's all I can focus on unfortunately. Love your other stories you post though, keep up the good work.
Is this a part 2? if so i really need the first part 🙂
FAFO
I really do like the story, but , the editing is pretty shabby. Nothing personal.
“Mommy, Cthulhu is touching me again.”
“Cthulhu, stop touching your little sister!”
“Aw, mom.”
Would the Hoomins survive!
Sorry I just can't take the time line it has taken to understand the storyline so I am out.
Good story.
This doesn’t make sense.
What a horrible story.
I can't get a grasp on wtf is going on
Ok i had to speed up the play back to 1.5 times faster to make it sound right.
Anyone else have this problem??
Why are all these stories Human Worship? Every last one! That story got old after hearing it a dozen times. Can you write about interaction between made-up species with real dynamics? Not hurray for our side? For some reason Youtube has decided that all the Sci Fi that I want to watch is human vs other species, and humans conquer the day. Get rid of this theme!
“Cap”-“Cap”-“Cap”. I’m done.
Write humans as either weak or strong. Pick one, they can't be both. The whole "Tis but a flesh wound… now take this" bit is annoying the second time you use it, and gets less palatable each time you play it.
This "story" ammounts to a $#!`-post collection of useless words. Zero worldbuilding, just Stuff-and-Things happening. It's not the reader's job to independently imagine the backstory to the events described. Why should anyone care about any of these one dimensional characters, their sacrifices, or their supposed achievements? Entire info dump summarized in 21 words:
"Start. Are human. Humans are afraid. Human are victims. Humans make sacrifices. Humans achieve thing. Humans are strong now. Repeat. End"
I'm not impressed. Do better or do less.