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So you found an Inqusitorial fortress?
Please, either use a better aI narrator, or do it yourself. I cringe everytime a word is misspronounced, which is pretty much every second one
The beginning has no context, so very little that is said has any meaning.
The word choice is not very good. It's overly flowery and uses a lot of tired expressions.
Stygian halls ~ how are halls related to the river Styx?
cryptic warnings
humanity held its breath
weird energy ~ why is it weird?
breath echoed ~ seriously?
looming castle
sensors blared a warning ~ huh? I guess you meant a warning blared, but the word choice makes little sense. This would more likely be some kind of beep, buzz, whistle or verbal warning
voice steady and focused ~ how can a voice be focused?
hovered at the gaping entrance ~ huh? Maybe you meant waited or hesitated.
a mural?
how would they know the war was ancient?
This AI is all over the place! If you aren't going to take the time to check its work AT ALL, I'm not going to take the time to try to read it. This stuff should be embarrassing for you! Horrible.