So generic, and yet so morally bankrupt… It’s a webtoon original. And I’m reading it through until my brain can’t take anymore.
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Thanks for watching yet another read-through of a webtoon original! Some of these are so similar to each other, it gets hard to tell them apart…
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My Baldur's Gate 3 addled brain read this as "Murderous Dungeon is a Nice Guy" and I think I like the concept of a sentient dungeon trying to romance an adventurer
😂😂🤣 I love these read throughs. I can't believe someone wrote this story just like I can't believe I watched 3 episodes of "Reborn as a Vending Machine, I Now Wander the Dungeon". It's a weird timeline we live in.
Like always, God-Tier commentary 👌
Gorgeous
Snicker, snicker. Because you're not you when you're hungry.
Basically, the archetypal Webtoon fantasy is Beauty and the Beast but Beast is already good looking but far more violent.
I'd like to see Dannphan read Gotham Academy. There's a lot to love and also a bit to make fun of. I think Dannphan would have fun reading the character Maps.
I dropout this webcomic after three chapters because of all the cliches and everything that you already said.
All Hail The Squib Nation!
I'm hot and I have sandwiches is going to be my new pickup line.
Honestly, my gently raised beast is actually a bit wholesome, especially comparative to this. Like in there the two characters are actually around the same age and actually grow up as friends before starting the romance.
Me waking up and seing the video thumbnail: HOLY SH*T DANNPHAN MADE A VIDEO ON THE SUBWAY SANDWICH MAHNWA
Question 😅is there an action adventure with no romans in webtoons that is popular?
Finding out what most women were into was one of the most disenchanting moments of my life
This comic look and soun amazing. I want more.
Me critiquing along: 4:10 Who doesn't understand how painful wounds can be?!? Huh!?! Show me the person that "can't imagine how painful a wound can be!!!
5:18 every comic book reader knows what dotted word balloons mean, no need to write whisper on it
11:40 this horse knows what manga it's in
Nice wholesome romances dont get the little middle school girls titulated
Never thought comics could actually burn your retina.I know better now.
How to fix this comic:
1. Have the protagonist save him when he was a SMALL DRAGON. There isn't age gap problem anymore and would make sense as to why she would want to take care of it. (PS: I don't know if she having healing powers is going to be relevant later in the story, but you could have her just take care of his wound normaly wihout all this magical crap.)
2. Show the humans attacking and hunting dragons FIRST (because they irrationaly fear then), and have the dragons attack the castle in relataliation (giving humans a reason to fear them) instead of the grave robbing stuff. Have a scenario where both sides are in the wrong.
Done (at least for these first chapter's I don't know how much worse this comic can get).