Original Scifi Story | The Harmony of First Contact
Author ► Magnetar
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Music:
Of Virtue – Christoffer Moe Ditlevsen | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqF4_3qUdmw
The Haunted Little Girl – Marc van der Meulen | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrD0dAFMLRk
Together We Rise – Philip ayers | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ny8rLsuqUfs
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Very nice!!
Gods, what a fucking masterpiece. This story is absolutely gorgeous. Especially the beginning parts… it takes quite an exceptional bit of creative writing to get my face to start leaking, but this particular example accomplished that downright effortlessly. I hope the author knows what it is they’ve made here… the message contained within is a fundamentally aspirational one. Our species should, or even needs to, strive for this mentality, regardless of whether we ever encounter “others from elsewhere” or not.
I guess bad things must happen with blood shed and hate, war, loss and death before we can get to the other side to find peace and to let go of want, power control and greed and have true peace. To Live together in love & light grow spiritual! However, Even then… after long periods of time goes by and history is forgotten, covered up all that lived it are gone there is always someone that makes it all happen again. War, blood shed, History repeating itself with different faces and ancestors. Then peace again. Almost like a balance. A vicious cycle. Wonder if it will ever break?
Will we ever get to the point and grow spiritually to find our higher self’s and find mastery of peace and grow into a higher dimension? I think about this a lot. What great story! Thanks!
That gave me tingles. Good feels. Universal unity 🤝 ❤. If only utopian visions were real. Hooked reptilians destroy everything. Been kicked out of over 100 worlds
That was magnificent, inspires me to sit and put my own thoughts to paper.❤
Kry-zar-ee are space Iksar. Blast from old eq
Grateful for your voice lulling me off to sleep!!! Thanks again!!! I truly hope that you have someone or something that helps you with your insomnia. 👾 🚀 🥱💤
Downloading for work! Can’t wait!!
Excellent work! Captivating story and narration .
It's beautiful to see the return of optimism in Sci-Fi every now and then. There was both a good message here, as well as a hopeful ending. Lovely story, Mag!
my lovely Magnetar ❤ I hope your week is stellar & you're having the best day ever!
WELL DONE ❤ a very simple tale of hope & peace! Representative of ALL technologies brought about with the hope of good but turned evil in the pursuit of greed or vengeance!
Much, much ♥️ & RESPECT! You are APPRECIATED! ✝️🛐 G0D † BLESS 🛐✝️
i know this was a short story, and it was amazing but I'm hopeful there's going to be a part 2.
This story is captivating. Great job narrating it, the soundtrack really sets the tone fantastic job.
Beautiful story, Starseed. Love the ending.
I thought that intro style looked familiar. I recognize Gen's work.
Wonderful
Wonderful work, everything come together beautifully. You have a good beginning there is a ton you can do with these characters. Keep up your great work!
Absolutely wonderful, I hope to help channel such wonderful energy in my own writing
Mankind: we know what we are capable of, and no one deserve that….yet ( why human avoid war)
Awesome bro!
you wrote this??? so beautiful!! The pacing and the music. It made me emotional. Fantastic job.
And the song Amelia played for first contact was "Am Fenster" by City.
Original Scifi Story | The Harmony of First Contact
Author ► Magnetar
I wrote this in a few hours the day of upload. I really just wanted to get some thoughts on paper. I wish it was longer, but at least it didn't overstay its welcome. <3
Music:
Of Virtue – Christoffer Moe Ditlevsen | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqF4_3qUdmw
The Haunted Little Girl – Marc van der Meulen | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrD0dAFMLRk
Together We Rise – Philip ayers | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ny8rLsuqUfs
I believe in reality the first contact would go like this:
"WHAT'S YOUR NAME!?"
"TONY."
"FUCK YOU, TONY!"
But with 68 years passing between each line.
Absoluetly Wonderful story thank you for sharing it with us
“Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster… for when you gaze long into the abyss. The abyss gazes also into you.”
― Friedrich W. Nietzsche
This bought a single tear to my eye. Beautiful man.
I'm not often moved to tears by sci-fi stories but, theres something so deep in the themes for this story. like a vast eager longing and open willingness to find kindred beings like us out in the vast cosmos… amidst the dark loneliness of our continuous searching.
This was absolutely fantastic! The music, the sub version of expectations forged from the repeat of the same tropes playing on loop in this genre. You are every talented! Thank you for the amazing story and amazing narration for this video and all others!
we need something like this in real life
It's the Yin and the Yang. For everything great and good, there is horror and evil. In order to protect the good, you HAVE to become a different person. Too bad most people only care about themselves and what they have now. And would turn their backs on what's right and just, just to protect what they have. Welcome to the new humanity. I wish you luck.
this is cool, it reminds me of Stellaris a little, at least a lot of the lore for the game is like this…
Well what do you know….all it takes is a violin to defeat David Icke's reptilians?🎻
This was so innovational. I was along for the journey. Every word you used to convey what became my reality for these few moments were intensified by the songs used for each mood. Beautiful work of art!
Freedom , love and unity are very powerful things but the intent of HEART can most definitely change the overall intent of any situation!! May GOD BLESS US ALL AND BLESS US IN UNITY AND CARE FOR ONE AND OTHER !!
This was just…bad.
I want to say it was boring, unimaginative, shallow, flat, or something more descriptive but there really isn't a better term for this story. It's all the worst things about trash Sci fi without the actual dialogue.
I also hope I'm one of the few who feel this way. Unsubscribing.
I'm so glad it ended how I wanted ot to, that was really good! Looking forward to more of your work.
Lovely story. And amazing music. ❤
I love that a bunch of narrators are writing their own stories now, kinda makes me want to join the fray!
Well done Magnet boi! 😁
Beautiful story, well narrated. Thank you for your effort, looking forward to any original writing that comes out in the future
I saw the but coming from a mile away…Great story though…
Fantastic.
Awful story. Boring. Maybe for children. Maybe…
I see you went with my "void walkers"/"void dwellers" idea. I had no idea. Very cool man, glad you liked the suggestions.
Loving the black screen
Well… that was beautiful. There isn't much to say about it. Kind of epic.
Absolutely stunning 😊
This story just became my comfort story. I listen to it when I'm trying to relax. I don't care about flaws like all bad species being reptilian. Ugh.
Just started the story.. not keen on the blank screen though.. just some stars would be nice