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In a post-apocalyptic world, Jarak, a hunter, confronts alien invaders—the Others—to save his tribe. When the Others capture his people, including Tela, a tribal elder, Jarak embarks on a guerrilla resistance, utilizing ancient relics as weapons. Discovering a rift the aliens use to enter their world, Jarak and Tela execute a daring plan to close it with an explosive implosion. Their success devastates the alien presence, but leaves Jarak and his tribe in a ravaged world, facing an uncertain future. It’s a story of survival, resilience, and the struggle against a seemingly invincible enemy to protect one’s community.
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stupid sexy starbound…….
What do you think about the sound effects in the story?
This was an amazing story tonight. Excellent narration. Thank you 🤗 🌟 🌌
Sounding good!
The air seemed tangible? Well I hope so, otherwise how do you breath?
Going deeper into the cave, they found the rift.
Infiltrating the enemy camp, they found the power core and the rift.
That rift moves around, apparently.
Stupid continuity mistakes in the story ALL OVER THE PLACE. .
AI generated crap
I would take a bet that the story was originally longer but has been chopped to shorten it. Shame it screws with the continuity. Spoiled the whole timeline of the story. Sad.
Sound effects were alright. Though, personally I think if your going to add effects like that you might as well make it something similar to a dramatized adaptation.
Didn't really care too much for this one. It sounded as if someone watched Battlefield Earth and thought it's terrible, (and it is), but it's fixable, (no it isn't), The plot itself has too many inconsistencies. The aliens arrived in ships but what's the point of having ships if they have a warp gate planet side. If they are looking for some "thing" not someone then what's the point of keeping his people after they prob their minds? After they were done with them. Calling them "inheritors" makes no sense either.
The ending that describes the interaction with Tela and him is a bit off. It made it sound as if she was left behind, "he" sprinted to the exit. There are also too many scene descriptions that cause story to drag on. I don't think the mcguffin worked well in the story either. It's not terrible maybe a 5 out of 10. There are certainly ways to fix some of the flaws but even if they were fixed, it would still only be a 6 or 7 out of ten. The short story form just doesn't suite so many variables that beg investigation.
Why did the Others make a cage of twisted branches and bone?
Meanwhile, in a different era, on a planet far from this one, a group of cowboys & native americans team up against demons from the sky.