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Humans are Space Orcs
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Lord, that's hard to listen to.
To be fair I only listened to a little and I don’t know if this is a stand alone or if we already know about all these characters in another story. My only critique would be to describe things slightly more. (What do the probes look like?) how about the helmets?) the aliens?). At the start it helps the audience visualize But still impressive keep it up