How would a Common girl, know all of this information? Was she an actual spy?
Corps isn't spelled "Core". Also, a single soldier trains untold millions of troops? A Pilot becomes the Grand Admiral?
Liked the story but some points need to be addressed.
Also, for the love of God and Everything Else find a new AI voice, this one doesn't have any inflection and is almost monotoned, making it like a reading of a crappy poem.
It's an okay story if you overlook the fact the only way they could sneak in was to find a stealth device! Elise Captain Kirk had the foresight to steal one.
Great story ❤🔥
Love these Sci-Fi stories more than anything else right now
Like this story very much. It's not full of repetitive detritus. Thanks !
How would a Common girl, know all of this information? Was she an actual spy?
Corps isn't spelled "Core". Also, a single soldier trains untold millions of troops? A Pilot becomes the Grand Admiral?
Liked the story but some points need to be addressed.
Also, for the love of God and Everything Else find a new AI voice, this one doesn't have any inflection and is almost monotoned, making it like a reading of a crappy poem.
Just my thoughts.
I love this story very well written
It's an okay story if you overlook the fact the only way they could sneak in was to find a stealth device! Elise Captain Kirk had the foresight to steal one.
Sorry but this is a rubbish story