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Timing makes no sense. AI is not there yet.
Same story slightly different names from a very short list of names that he uses in all his stories. Would be nice to get a completely different story with completely different names. And that the stories would be more consistent in their timelines and many other things.
Stole DM tech info, destroy it so the guys they stole it from can't get it.
why is it always mandibles? why not tentacles or their gelatinous forms?
The story has some potential. Just needs to be fleshed out a bit. And I'm not sure if you are adding or removing some of your previous upload stories because this is the third one I've listened to that sounds exactly like this story with a few key differences. If so, word of advice. I would mention that in your descriptions. Otherwise, it will confuse people and probably make them think you are stealing stories. Also, a lot of repeat plots in the story keep popping up. And separate time jumps with chapters or tags so people aren't confused about the timing with in the story. We've jumped from Nolans story line to zacksis, or plylar. Whatever their names were. But jumping from one persons perspective to the next will make a reader stop listening all together.