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I really liked the story, but I wish there were more pictures to go along with it.
Corvac is dead…then he's not. WTF!!! "We are done here. Secure the site and call for extraction". There was also one of these…its over but then its not moments during the first battle. The story is convoluted and all over the place. The weird story progression would be tolerable if the story line itself didn't just suddenly start over out of KNOWHERE. It is time to start listening to these stories, and, EDITING them, before posting them. The potential for fun and exciting stories is here, but some refinement is needed.
Seems like it jumps back to do a different ‘what if’ a few times. Otherwise it’s kinda like Mass Effect, I liked it.
I like the story great job 👍
very nice <3