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At 25:45 it cuts back to what should be placed about 5 minutes before.
Again a story with no end 😒
Part of the problem with this story is no proper editing. In fact that is a good bit of the problem. This author's tendency to rewrite the story without tying the rewrite into the story correctly is another part of the problem. And his tendency to kill people off and then a couple minutes later bring them back to life does not help the story at all in most cases.
Neat genre getting spoiled by this low quality spam.