A feat of human and Ardanian alliance against the cruel and ruthless Zentari invaders. When the Zentari launched a devastating attack on Ardanis Prime, the human fleet joined forces with Ardanian warriors to defend their homeworld against the enemy.
HFY Sci-Fi short story I wrote myself, trying to improve these feedback is appreciated!
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Please, the dialog! And the Steely Resolve Of The Heros! And the brutally 1950s Saturday afternoon matinee Action Packed Adventure!!
You gotta lighten up on the heavy-handidness of the description. Tell the story first, then worry about trills and accents. Unless, of course, this whole thing is a romp — in which case, I apologize for harshing the buzz.