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This was a quick one but still good at building the tension
I feel it's safe to say that Tom wasn't the sharpest tool in the shed, but st the same time, Mark was in definite need of a good old fashion ass kicking, the more painful the better.
**SPOILERS**
So the story can be boiled down to; Mark's (possibly manic depressive) boss sends him out on a strange and arguably questionable assignment to investigate some mysteriously, suddenly bad spring water, Mark sees a banshee (or whatever the hell she is), she apparently murders Mark, the story abruptly ends. Nothing is answered or cleared up…
Who the hell is she? Who knows?
Is she connected to the bad water? I guess. Who knows?
Why did she murder Mark? Maybe she's just a jerk. Who knows?
Was there something more to Mark's boss's intentions? Who knows?
Is this story a side story in a greater universe? Because otherwise, IMHO, it's kind of lacking to me… I think it's well told though and creepy enough, but seriously lacking.
Excellent work.
I've quit jobs for less. To hell with that noise
Loving the steady stream of stories recently. Keep it up!
Boss or not, I can't believe he let that guy talk to him like that. I've seen people catch a beating for alot less.
Ooww Dark man welcome back with these awesome stories. It's 1:30 am down here, cozy in bed and time to put my earplugs in and fall asleep on your narrations.
Just wanted to say thank you man. โคโค got some trouble sleeping, years on meds for it already but I found out this ritual the past 7 years or so already listing to stories is the best medicine. You are awesome and do great work for many folks.
oh…what an ending….. he must have been in so much pain, i was kinda hoping hed wake in a hospital or something :((
Hey brother you make my uber eats shifts and my day job shifts go by much better. Always get excited when i see you post. So I gotta acknowledge your hard work lately your uploading much much more frequently. I really appreciate it. Thanks brother
Spoiler –
i really was expecting her to be unable to leave the pond/gate perimeter. And that tom would make it out, barely getting safely to the car. And then as he peels away thinking he survived with the footage in hand, she appears thru the bottle of water the author described in great detail. And when the phone and car are found, they are both water logged with no evidence left behind ๐
Great story !!
This channel is leagues above every other narration channel
Would you stay in a buried coffin overnight?
Just asking….
Its always sad when they die at the end but its always such a good story keep posting!
No!! NO!!! See, this is exactly why I like my stories delivered from the first person perspective!! ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Maaaaaaaan, I'ma need a minute after this one!! ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ
Tom: "Why send me?"
Because you're expendable, duh.
Mark did Tom soooo dirty.
This story really wasn't a good one
Banshee?
Great job ๐๐พ โค
Oof. If I was in Tom's shoes during that phone call, I would have been like "No, I DON'T work for you. I quit. Come get the pictures yourself. I'm going home."
666k subs thatโs ironic
You know the protagonist is fucked when the story is told in 3rd person ๐
Great narration, as always ๐
Though I could never listen to creepypastas to fall asleep, (I really don't get how some people manage to lol) I love listening to them while I draw.
Thank you for continuously making great content ^^
Good one!
Omg! How does it actually end?
Either Iโve been playing too much Zelda or the music reminds me of the opening music in totk
I love a good old fashioned bad ending
hey how tall are you (this is for a group project)
The dark insomniac
At the moment I see you're at 666K ๐ you rock big guy!
Congrats on 666k, man!
I could never tolerate that much disrespect from a boss ๐ I worked in retail and been called worse things by customers and brushed it all off but if it came from a boss or coworker!? Oh hell no ๐
Well narrated, but this story was not that well written lol. Way too many analogies haha
Definitely don't see enough banshee creepy pastas
I dunno man, a couple of the adjective choices didn't make a whe lot of sense and took me out of the story.
I know you didn't write it, but it's still a shame.
I would have told his boss , bye . So fast.
12. 20 min in, id have already told the guy to go f himself
Loving the more frequent uploads Som ๐ช
Damn… rip
What a fucking cliffhanger
Always love listening to these stories, a nice change from the old monotone readings with the same copy and paste music from other creepypasta readers
Thank you for your pronunciation of the title place. i see all the syllables and totally butchered it.
I suspect Tom wasn't the only one Mark suckered into this "investigation".