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This would be a whole lot better if the author, somehow, could tell us how the bad guys found out about ALL of the information surrounding the components of the weapon. This story got redundantly DULL…never bothered to finish watching it.
I loved the story, great narrative. Thank you for sharing!
Its all good, but i got ads every 30 seconds…
love story…more.i suggest search for human hidden outposts and caches.there is still living human worlds where a more advance human civilization with planetary shields,powerful weapons and more..hidden outpost where crews of 5 advance super mass cannon ships in a hollowed out moon.the new enemy is an offshot of humans that are biomechanical in the story..the federation creates an ark for their members to not go extinct to leave for deep space like humans did before them.
"Fleet's"
The constant ignorance of basic English grammar I see on the internet makes me all the more certain that humanity is headed for a regression to barbarity.
Pretty good story.
I'm surprised they were able to do as good as they could with the mass of leaks that allowed the enemy to get all the information they needed
amazing story line.. would love to see it in more detail
I liked the story, however some of the phrases and statements became repetitive? it would be nice if for once there wasn't an even greater threat coming to undo or challenge the protagonists. The finding of a single HUMAN was a nice twist but if you had added that the Human knew of a planet where thousands of humans were in pods in a cloaked world hidden in space with people like? Scientists, Engineers doctors, ,Advanced AI weapons Drones, with underground labs filled with new top of the line ships and humans most advanced weapons systems ready to defend the Galaxy.
Just a thought overall a good story
name please?
Mini series!👍👍
Ah, that is like the discovery of The Shadows and the coming out of the Vorlons in Babylon 5.
A good story but there a lot of errors, plot holes the size of mountains, a lot of missing information. Unspoken information of how anyone knows the Information they have, etc, etc. Almost there, but not quite.
Part 2
He was told to destroy the broken ancient remains of the fleet and erase all data concerning its existence. And then when he returns to his ship, suddenly he knows about an incomplete super weapon that has not yet been mentioned? Seems like we are missing part of the story here.
A link to a text version would be nice.
I have heard all of this one has many incongruences, as an example they evacuated the ship twice and the fact that there is too much action. At the end I was tired of listening to the audio. Its a good start but has a lot to go, as a sugestion I would made 3 or 4 short stories and turn this one into a serie of sories😔😔😔
I liked the way the story had went better then alot of the other's
Have the weapon used it , then oh crap no weapon, now found ships . How did enemy find them. Story drops off jumps to something else.
Same story off from admiral Anderson just different name in second half
Of course, they forgot.The one kept secret of the humans, their home world.The original homework world, which surprised still there never been touched never even known of which they wanted to speak of out of their own Solar System or out of their own area of a collection of solar systems and communities.
Which will be found one day.
That was really entertaining thanks
Some things dont really make sense.
So the Kredox were driven back into hiding mostly by humans and some other species , they were a myth but the moment Zorgax looks for the weapons parts, they suddenly appear and they have a known territory ?
If that is the case why did it took them so long to look for Human Tech, specially in areas where they were defeated, makes no sense.
Had Zorgax discovered the human fleet 1 week or days later, would the Kredox have already the "human weapon" assembled by then?
I’m enjoying the story but I have to ask. The narrator, is it my imagination or does the synthetic voice switch between British and American accents
What happened after 50 mins? Previously they landed in a dropship, retrieved the energy core, engaged the enemy in battle and died heroes. Then engaged the enemy and somehow won, then landed on a planet using a matter transporter to retrieve the energy core…again?
Love the story
Great story. I really love the part where it went. " The..youtube ad…humans…YOUTUBE AD…hidden…YOUTUBE AD….teck…YOUTUBE AD…ships …YOUTUBE AD…I YOUTUBE AD…watched…YOUTUBE AD the …YOUTUBE AD…first…YOUTUBE AD…10 minutes after the 12 ad stopped watching
Tellarites, Andorians? two star trek species?
Keep up the good work.
Im like 30min in an already see ends with humans asking why the hell they are recovering legacy tec that is centurys old…
0:00: 👽 Alien encounter with remnants of hidden human fleet reveals shocking capabilities and raises concerns for the galaxy.
8:40: 👽 Alien captain receives encrypted message revealing hidden information, decides to investigate remote system alone for the truth about humanity.
17:30: 🚀 Captain Zorx leads his crew on a dangerous mission to secure a powerful weapon, facing off against a ruthless enemy in a race for the fate of the galaxy.
26:39: ⚔️ Heroic sacrifice as engineer fights off insectoid warriors to save crew in a desperate last stand.
34:45: ⚔️ Alien leaders plan a mission to stop the enemy from completing a powerful weapon.
43:02: ⚔️ Human crew prepares last defense against alien fleet with advanced energy cannon.
51:31: 💥 Human fleet's cannon decimates alien ships, causing Intrepid's structural failure and crew casualties.
59:51: 💥 Alien realization of human self-destruct sequence and sacrifice to protect technology leads to devastating defeat.
1:07:57: ⚔️ Allies unite to confront powerful enemy, racing towards destiny to protect the Galaxy's future.
1:16:28: 💔 Lost opportunity to defeat enemies leads to despair and determination among alien leaders.
1:24:55: ⚔️ Last human Commander and alien Captain unite to fight against common enemy, bringing hope and determination.
1:33:12: 🚀 Exploration of a lost human flagship evokes emotions of pride, sadness, and determination among the crew.
1:41:24: 👽 Zorak's leadership strengthens the Federation, fosters unity, and maintains peace with former enemies, but mysterious incidents hint at looming danger.
Timestamps by Tammy AI