After 5,000 Years Later, Humanity Returns for Blood | HFY Sci-Fi Story September 16, 2024 by Galactic Peak Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn After 5,000 Years Later, Humanity Returns for Blood | HFY Sci-Fi Story source
Well written… I think. Unfortunately, the narration was so uninspired and wooden that my mind wandered more than… something that wanders a lot. Keep writing, but practice more on the narration. Reply
Should consider doing longer better constructed stories. Still enjoy them
you should write a book
Well written… I think. Unfortunately, the narration was so uninspired and wooden that my mind wandered more than… something that wanders a lot. Keep writing, but practice more on the narration.
Enjoyed this!
Enjoyable, but you keep repeating the same things over and over again.