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Notes to writer:
TOO MUCH WAFFLE !!!
TOO MUCH PURPLE PROSE !!!
You never describe action, you only mention it or skip to a successful outcome
NO TENSION, NO SUSPENSE.
Surely, if the A,I. Had destroyed the Mars base staff, Earth would have destroyed it immediately
How could they hear satellites moving in orbit?
If it is within a human base, why would the signal be a mystery ?
How could satellites elswhere in the galaxy threaten the Earth ?
VERDICT 4/10