How does the control panel p of the cannon not have anyone working it? How did she get into the ship to try and turn off the cannon. Story sounds like the control panel is on the outside of the ship. Not feasible. Continuity is key.
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Good Story
OK, the final battle in the VACUUM of Space. How do Dragon Wings work in a vacuum ? Very poorly thought out. Bad story ! Ten Point Scale: -30/10.
Hell, Didn’t know that the Galactic Council was Mu.slim, as they’re the only known people who behead innocent victims. Wow.
How does the control panel p of the cannon not have anyone working it? How did she get into the ship to try and turn off the cannon. Story sounds like the control panel is on the outside of the ship. Not feasible. Continuity is key.