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The Lorpa face a relentless invasion by the Void, a swarm of bio-organic horrors that overwhelm their defenses. As the Lorpa’s automated sentries and orbital fortresses fall, their starfighters engage in desperate battles. In their last stand, the Lorpa send an SOS, answered by Admiral Bailey and the Human Systems Alliance. Together, they launch a coordinated counterattack, targeting the Void’s capital ships and ground forces. The Humans and Lorpa, fighting side by side, ultimately repel the Void. In the aftermath, a new alliance is forged, symbolizing hope and unity in the face of galactic threats.
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I like the idea of a species evolving specifically to become a space war fleet
Okay look. What you do in narrating the stories are such a great help for people that you don't even know about I have low vision and I read a lot and study a lot and with people like you I can enjoy the world of reading without AI❤❤❤
Earth fleet control.
"What do you mean a sos from Captain Bailey"
Controller Vaus
"Just that commander a sos emergency distress signal"
Commander Kitson sat down with a thump.
"This has never happened before a human distress signal"
Panic set to work in His mind what can he do apart from send a second ship.
"Vaus play me the distress signal now" Kitson demanded..
Hiss a crackle of interference………….Earth Fleet control this crackle pop hiss……captain pop pop ley urgent request imperi pop hiss…
The message cleared up continuing
"Sir we are out of burger sauce I repeat no more McDonalds burger sauce send the fleet max speed NOW"
"Oh my f..King lord SEND THE FLEET"
My man! I promise you're honing your skill each and every read. Your mixed narrations are getting great! Keep it up!
Helping the void warrior? That's just stupid.
Excellent story – except don't introduce players after the fact. The Indomitable was purportedly, a single ship… which then became a Fleet. Visualise the battle – from start to end – and go from there. Additionally – how could the Lorpa be emaciated (starving)? The 'War' has only lasted days…
What strategy would you use against the Void's relentless swarms?
Kudos to Starbound for the narration, but the story is a bit too… pompous and overwrought.
Outside of providing some context as to why an Earth Fleet would be in that part of space and sticking to kind of solid combat reporting that this should have been. They could still have formed more formal alliances after the battle. Yet, somehow, this was really not a combat warriors tale of combat against a foe threatening the galaxy.
First there was one human ship then all of a sudden a whole fleet. At first the one human ship was kicking a$$ then all of a sudden they need a turning point. To many unnecessary words as usual. And the repeats. Don't you proof read these first.
Shouldn't the F-22 Raptor engines stall, in space. The F-22 is an in atmosphere jet fighter, it shouldn't be able to operate in outer space.
Well.. It's certainly not the worst story I have ever heard. The reading it self was good, however, the story itself needs a little work. The one thing that REALLY broke the immersion for me was calling their fighters "F22 Raptors". The writer could have called it ANYTHING, and it would have been better than that. Beyond that, while I understand this genre is EXTREMELY pro human, There was at no point ANY tension. The humans show up to stick up for some poor alien with a single ship, mop the floor with an alien armada, and scour an entire planet for enemies. Unfortunately, they do this like its a humdrum Tuesday at the office. There is no sense that they have even the slightest chance to have a mildly inconvenient time with this. In short, there was no sense of conflict.
Let's hope we find similar friends when someone comes for us.
In every reality their is a Swarm..40k..
Ok, when you're portraying the Admiral, you're reminding me of the actor who plays Buzz Lightyear.
"cold calculating gaze of a creditor"
He's talking too fast and im stoned
Ok…back to the matrix now…cant stay awake any longer
The narrator may be human but the story is still AI. I mean holy crap. Just spend some time with that microsoft copilot or whatever AI you choose to go with. Ask it to tell you a story similar to this, and you'll get all the same buzzwords.
Exterminatus !!
How many flag ships do they have ?
Feels ai created. Repitition of phrases can be a turn off, and anyone who knows war ain't t gunna be surprised by brutality. Good passion in your reading though
So why does my comments keep getting deleted within minutes because i give you a link for inspiration from the templin institue with a positive comment? Of great story telling, stellaris invicta season 1 prologue… I really wanna know what my comment is harming.
sounds very attractive
Send a note to the original author: intelligence is rarely used in military speech, it's nearly always shortened to intel; but it's more often refered to by the geoup it's a parr of: in the case of navy, you'd call for ops (operations); I think everyone else would call for S2 (staff 2, 2 is just where intel & sec are).
For more on staff positions, look up the wiki for: staff military.
Call signs are rarely 'cool,' for every awesome callsign there are 20 not-so-cool to just awful . Many are wordplays on the pilots name, some current cultural meme, or something that the individual was involved in (often embarrassing)
Can I send you stories?
"Railgun projectiles, traveling at hypersonic speeds," … IN A SPACE BATTLE?!?!?!
Easiy dodged, no? How far away are the respective ships?
Too many adjectives. Gets too "flowery" and a bit draggy.
why are the "Magog" the first species that comes to my mind hear of the void
Intelligence officer Singh would not be a member of the same family that "Khan Noonien Singh" belongs too?
I had one problem. How long was this battle? It doesn't sound like it took more than a few days at most and more like hours. Unless the Lorpa have extremely high metabolisms, there's no way they would be emaciated.
The sci fi shorts are the reason that this story has too many holes in it.
The overuse of adjectives is being used to cover up the deficiencies.
All in all, the story as written is not enough to keep my attention. It is just noise.
I knew from the title that the humans would win.
Subbed.
Good narrative. But sad quality of story. Many plot holes and redundancy of certain phrases are ruining it for me. The AI story maker fails again.
In this future i will open up a business …making armchairs . seems like it`s good business
These things are getting better: good work! The match between the script and the narration was near-perfect. The tactics were a little more believable than usual, too. Maybe next time use fewer identical phrases such as "engines thrumming with power"?
13:37 well I'll be the kid got him self a true air to air kill no more balloon vegan diet for him lol.
A good story well read but beware an excess of hyperbole and feverish excitement, it defeats itself and numbs the listener. Thank you for your work. UKUK
So many of these stories are just derivative. They start out about how not to piss off humans and then go to a point where the humans show mercy. It's just fugging ridiculous ..
Taking a huge ship into the atmosphere , not wise.
F22 is an atmospheric fighter. It can't be used in space. Unless you actually meant SF22. (Space Fighter 22)
Astoundingly, it only requires a maximum of five humans with sufficient "determination" or "resolve" to accomplish anything. This is childish in the extreme. Throughout WW2 no one had more of those qualities than the Japanese and it did them no good. Please try to grow up. A force can not be invulnerable if you want drama beyond 5th grade level. A fleet can not defeat men embedded in an area. See recent news re: Sudan and Red Sea.